Score: 8

"Finally"

submission: Ultimo Dragon Ep. 2

date: July 28, 2005

Heh, it finally came out! Ya, I liked it but there are some things that ou should work on.
-You're a good drawer, don't get me wrong, but using the pencil tool makes your lines jagged. Try the paintbrush on very skinny. Plus, when you gave sideway views of the characters their foreheads were gigantic. :)
-The story line was good but not orginal. I can see the similarities with other animes on the whole bad guys invade island with small kid who has like superpowers... That's fine and all but f you're going to do something like that then add your own twists in there.
-Too short. You have 5 mb that your able to put in a movie to host on newgrounds. You only used 1.5. Expand a little. Make it longer so it feels like your watching a cartoon.
- The voices were MUCH better than the last one. They were clear and went along well with the characters.
If you on the next one more than you did this one and add those elements I suggested, you will have an animation at 4.xx score. Good job and good luck.

Score: 0

"Heh"

submission: Gauntlet Legends Game

date: July 21, 2005

I find it funny how everyone is saying how great this game is for a 13 year old. Ya, I'd be saying that too if it wasn't stolen. Good luck explaining that to everyone.

Score: 2

"Uhh"

submission: generic movie 4

date: July 18, 2005

Ya, that was pretty bad. You need to add art to its and stuff it was very bleak. Plus, you need to fix the buttons so you don't have to click on a letter. On the hit part in the buttons page thats where you put where the user is able to click.